The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Tell Lillu to stop slacking and work those errors out
Jeido
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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#11 » Thu Sep 17, 2009 12:48 am

Zone: Pofire
NPC: Hoogre

Quest Dialogue says "Second, you will need a stone that aslo matches the type..."

Aslo = Also
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Tyler
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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#12 » Thu Sep 17, 2009 8:35 am

Fixed!
Item Change -> Reload needed
Spell Change -> Reload AND new Spellfile needed

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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#13 » Tue Sep 29, 2009 10:02 pm

Zone: THF
NPC: Lilly

Original Dialogue:

You say, 'Hail, Lilly'

Lilly says, 'I have a new task for you, Jerant. I am researching a potion to cure the evil corruption that has infected our ancient trees.. However I am missing some Drake Essence to complete the research. Please let me know if you would find any during your journeys.'

Suggested changes:

You say, 'Hail, Lilly'

Lilly says, 'I have a new task for you, Jerant. I am researching a potion to cure the evil corruption that has infected our ancient trees, however I am missing some Drake Essence to complete the research. Please let me know if you [removed would] find any during your journeys.'
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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#14 » Tue Sep 29, 2009 10:30 pm

  • Zone: THF
  • NPC: Organ
  • Dialogue: Organ whispers to you, 'I'm reasearching an ancient spell Koer, but I need my Book of Inspiration, Wizardry, Sorcery and Solutions to be able to succeed. Please find my students and bring back the precious books. You will find them in HighKeep, Kurn's Tower, Dagnor's Cauldron and the Tower of Frozen Shadows. Show them this letter so they will trust you. Bring back to me the four books, and I will reset your specializations.'
  • Problem: Only 3 books listed or missing comma.
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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#15 » Tue Sep 29, 2009 10:41 pm

  • Zone: THF
  • NPC: Organ
  • Dialogue: Organ whispers to you, 'I'm reasearching an ancient spell Koer, but I need my Book of Inspiration, Wizardry, Sorcery and Solutions to be able to succeed. Please find my students and bring back the precious books. You will find them in HighKeep, Kurn's Tower, Dagnor's Cauldron and the Tower of Frozen Shadows. Show them this letter so they will trust you. Bring back to me the four books, and I will reset your specializations.'
  • Problem: mispelling of the word researching.
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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#16 » Tue Sep 29, 2009 11:15 pm

Thanks! Fixed all, besides: Book of Inspiration, Wizardry, Sorcery and Solutions. Thats four no?

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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#17 » Tue Sep 29, 2009 11:20 pm

It should then be Inspiration, Wizardry, Sorcery, and Solutions with a comma after Sorcery.
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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#18 » Tue Sep 29, 2009 11:25 pm

omg, this is not grammar police, it's grammar military! :p

and fixed.. :)

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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#19 » Wed Sep 30, 2009 8:33 am

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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#20 » Wed Sep 30, 2009 8:35 am

lol, keep up the good work Officer!

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