The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Tell Lillu to stop slacking and work those errors out
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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#21 » Fri Oct 02, 2009 8:17 pm

Zone: THF
NPC: Lilly
Dialogue: Lilly says, 'I ... I know what it is this time. You see, my sister... she's in trouble. Please, you have to help her! I can spend only a little bit of my magic to help her... When we are seperated, we lose this mystical ward that keeps our lifeforce together. If we are not together, we will certainly die. Will you [rescue] her?'
Change: Seperated is spelled wrong - separated.
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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#22 » Sat Oct 03, 2009 12:35 am

Thanks, fixed!

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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#23 » Thu Oct 08, 2009 11:23 am

NPC: Murgot
Zone: THF
Dialogue: Murgot says, 'Instead of weapons, we've seen the orcs and sporelings carrying around these strange looking crystals and some weapons which apparently have lost their power. return to me one of these weapons and three of these crystals so that I can [continue my research] my research.'
Problem: Your saylink includes "continue my research" and then the quest::say probably has $continue my research.
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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#24 » Thu Oct 08, 2009 12:41 pm

fixed

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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#25 » Sat Oct 10, 2009 1:47 pm

Zone: THF
NPC: Gorgoza
Dialogue: None. The problem is in the second task granted by Gargoza the headhunter. In the task, The Shissar Assassin is missing the T in his name and so it comes up as "he Shissar Assassin"
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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#26 » Sat Oct 10, 2009 2:52 pm

Good catch, fixed!

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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#27 » Thu Oct 22, 2009 10:50 am

Name: Gurga The Giantslayer

Zone: Kael

Problem1: Upon compeltion of the giantslayer task, he says, "Blood on your armor, fire in your eyes. Hans, you deserved to be part of our porud clan and to wear The Giantslayer name."

and it should be ...

"Blood on your armor, fire in your eyes. Hans, you deserve to be part of our proud clan and to wear the Giantslayer name."

Problem2: The Giantslayer title really should be, "the Giantslayer" with a lower case "t".
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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#28 » Thu Oct 22, 2009 2:24 pm

The Giantslayer is fine, remember it's a title and isn't that the title name that you get?
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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#29 » Thu Oct 22, 2009 3:28 pm

Koeril wrote:Problem2: The Giantslayer title really should be, "the Giantslayer" with a lower case "t".
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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#30 » Thu Oct 22, 2009 4:04 pm

okok i was rushing :P
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