The Hidden Forest

Original:

Sheever says, 'Yes, a fine armor that is crafted from Chaos and smouldering iron! All you have to do is finda Rusty Chaotic Armor piece of fallen heroes in the Ruins of Old Guk. Return it to me along with three Chaotic Coins and I will consider crafting something valuable for you. Although I have doubts of your return..'

Edited:

Sheever says, 'Yes, a fine armor that is crafted from Chaos and smoldering iron! All you have to do is find a Rusty Chaotic Armor piece from the fallen heroes in the Ruins of Old Guk. Return it to me along with three Chaotic Coins and I will consider crafting something valuable for you. Although I have doubts of your return..'

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Also, since Sheever is telling you to loot armor off the "fallen heroes" of Guk (whom you must kill), shouldn't he be aligned with Order rather than Chaos? As it is right now he is basically commissioning you to murder his own heroes.

Fixed the text.

Faction = Tyler :p

It's not faction per se, just the wording in the quest text. He claims to be recruiting people for Chaos, but is telling them to assassinate Chaos' leaders.

If I may suggest the following changes for coherency. Since order and chaos really do not pertain to the fact of your life status (alive, undead, etc) then it should be a simple change to make more sense.

Original Text:

Sheever says, 'Gloomy day mortal! I'm recruiting fellow Chaos followers to join the battle against the Order. I am also making some durable [armor] for our seasoned soldiers. '

Suggested Changes:

Sheever says, 'Gloomy day mortal! I'm recruiting fellow Order followers to join the battle against the Chaos. I am also making some durable [armor] for our seasoned soldiers. '