Typo etc
Posted: Mon Oct 28, 2013 4:22 pm
Since you are probably going to leave alt-p in game(awaiting the next creative soul that feels like working on it), I will work on the wiki. I have just started a.. mage named Zzolz.
Its been awhile, so Im going through the script as its done. I noticed on the wiki, that the pages lack info. But to start off..
In the forest..
Typo on Herald of Diamond Crusade's text in game. After clicking 'Alternative' there is a typo just before 'continue' . The word encounters is missing an n.
He also explains "Once you enter the Alternative Progression(comma missing?) you won't be able to leave it, (<~~can probably get rid of comma and it) and visit other zones, until you complete it. However at this time the Alternative progression is still in developement, and content is only designed up to level 56, but we are working on a next zone which should come out soon. Eventualy, the path will take you all the way up to lev 70, at which time your character, outfited with unique set of items and spells, not available otherwise, will be able to return back into regular path and be ready to start raiding. You can find out more details about this by visiting our forums, the Alternative progression section.
Only you, Lillu, really know where you want to go with this area. My suggestion here is with the mindset that I figure no one on your volunteer staff currently even talks about working on alt-p, and we are waiting for a froggy individual, who may or may not know Chaos, begs to work on the project lol.. What I see in the wiki is broken information, and I will work on that. But, to begin with, I think some re-arranging of Herald words would make it a bit more, professional. Heres what i suggest, including fixing typo and grammatical issues.
... beginning text is fine, up until the end of second paragraph...
.. This path features unique quests and story driven encounters.(continue)
Herald of Diamond Crusade says, 'Once you enter the Alternative Progression, you won't be able to leave and visit other zones, until you complete it. Alt-P was concieved to have content to level your character to 70, and come out with unique equipment and spells, that can only be aquired by completing Alt-P. You would then be able to re-enter the main server zones and play along side others in The Hidden Forest. Please refer to the forums and wiki for more details on progress of Alternate Progression content.'
Something like that. Thoughts?
Z
Its been awhile, so Im going through the script as its done. I noticed on the wiki, that the pages lack info. But to start off..
In the forest..
Typo on Herald of Diamond Crusade's text in game. After clicking 'Alternative' there is a typo just before 'continue' . The word encounters is missing an n.
He also explains "Once you enter the Alternative Progression(comma missing?) you won't be able to leave it, (<~~can probably get rid of comma and it) and visit other zones, until you complete it. However at this time the Alternative progression is still in developement, and content is only designed up to level 56, but we are working on a next zone which should come out soon. Eventualy, the path will take you all the way up to lev 70, at which time your character, outfited with unique set of items and spells, not available otherwise, will be able to return back into regular path and be ready to start raiding. You can find out more details about this by visiting our forums, the Alternative progression section.
Only you, Lillu, really know where you want to go with this area. My suggestion here is with the mindset that I figure no one on your volunteer staff currently even talks about working on alt-p, and we are waiting for a froggy individual, who may or may not know Chaos, begs to work on the project lol.. What I see in the wiki is broken information, and I will work on that. But, to begin with, I think some re-arranging of Herald words would make it a bit more, professional. Heres what i suggest, including fixing typo and grammatical issues.
... beginning text is fine, up until the end of second paragraph...
.. This path features unique quests and story driven encounters.(continue)
Herald of Diamond Crusade says, 'Once you enter the Alternative Progression, you won't be able to leave and visit other zones, until you complete it. Alt-P was concieved to have content to level your character to 70, and come out with unique equipment and spells, that can only be aquired by completing Alt-P. You would then be able to re-enter the main server zones and play along side others in The Hidden Forest. Please refer to the forums and wiki for more details on progress of Alternate Progression content.'
Something like that. Thoughts?
Z
