The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

[loider]

NPC: Tunare
Zone: Plane of Growth

Original text: Well met Norro. I'm the sister of Queen Adrianne. We heared stories about your achievement in The Hidden Forest. You must have very powerful allies being able to accomplish such heroic acts!

heared should be heard OR since achievement is singular maybe you meant "We hear stories about your achievements in the Hidden Forest."

Also, I don't like her name dropping Queen Adrianne My sister, Queen Adri tells me...blah blah

[Lillu]

edited, thanks.

but c'mon, this is a royal family!

[Expletus]

Plane of Fear
Dread / Fright / Terror

Upon their death they shout "REVENGE MY DEATH"

Shouldn't it be AVENGE MY DEATH?

[Lillu]

they say something different, but changed some revenge to avenge.

[Relnon]

Its not actually a quest typo, but last time I checked 'Shadow Knight' was mispelled on the alla clone class drop down bar for spells. I believe it was spelled "Shadown Knight".

[Tyler]

Well spotted and fixed.

[Koeril]

Queen A's initial hail text is buggered. The saylink should probably show "make a difference" but instead says "I WILL make a difference" which isn't correct. I believe that was the character's reply when clicking the saylink.

Also, "tell me about artifacts" is unresponsive. << [edit] I think I was lagging when this happened

[Lillu]

Thanks, it was actually an issue with many scripts, since the "saylink" fix..

[Mr_Magoo]

Npc: Thrawli
Zone: Poair

(After you click the [slot 30]) he replies with the following):

Thrawli says, 'To earn a new epic slot 30 augment, you will need to return to me the following items: 3 Grey Marbles and a Symbol of Shattering. The marbles can be found nearly anywhere, but the symbol comes from only the most stalwart of Xegony's citizens - the Avatars. You'll also need one of these to combine the items in.'

(He hands you a bag the instant you click [slot 30] so to return items to him doesn't apply for this part).

Change to:

Thrawli says, 'To earn a new epic slot 30 augment, you will need the following items: 3 Grey Marbles and a Symbol of Shattering. You'll also need one of these to combine the items in. The marbles can be found nearly anywhere, but the symbol comes from only the most stalwart of Xegony's citizens - the Avatars.'

or

Thrawli says, 'To earn a new epic slot 30 augment, you will need to combine 3 Grey Marbles and a Symbol of Shattering in this bag. The marbles can be found nearly anywhere, but the symbol comes from only the most stalwart of Xegony's citizens - the Avatars.'

(Im not a grammer expert so my suggestions may or may not be proper)

[Lillu]

versian A is in, thanks