The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Tell Lillu to stop slacking and work those errors out
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Post#31 » Thu Oct 22, 2009 4:36 pm

I probably should have done it in a different order, it would have made more sense the other way.
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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#32 » Thu Oct 22, 2009 6:44 pm

thanks, all fixed.

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Post#33 » Wed Dec 02, 2009 10:24 pm

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Post#34 » Wed Dec 02, 2009 10:25 pm

hahaah i hate that word...
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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#35 » Wed Dec 09, 2009 1:10 pm

Zone: Panieel

Task for Batwings and Kobold Cloak and such, the one that takes the longest. On the task window:

Outfittign should be Outfitting.

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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#36 » Wed Dec 09, 2009 2:03 pm

thanks, fixed!

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Post#37 » Wed Dec 09, 2009 10:21 pm

*Sirens blare* I'm baaaack! Just took my first steps in Paineel and unfortunately didn't get past the first NPC ... sorry :(

You say, 'Hail, Emissary Talligos'

Emissary Talligos says, 'Welcome to the Diamond Crusade, Koer! We have laid siege to the city of Paineel and intend to hold it until it falls! We need many experienced fighters to help us to launch an efficient assault!. '

You say,'I think I am experienced enough...'

Emissary Talligos says, 'I don't think you are quite ready for the battle of such magnitude, but I urge you to practice your skills! For those who are just starting out, there are plenty of vermin to practice your skills on in the front yard. For those a bit more experienced, the tunnels of Warrens can provide an opportunity to raise your skills further. <space needed> In the mean time, please get yourself accustomed with the surrounding area. The essential supplies merchants, as well as banker, are available in the next room. If you need of some basic armor and weapons, they can help you out. Our trainers could also be helpful to you.'

You say,'Who are these trainers?'

Emissary Talligos says, 'Heroes and champions of all professions have come to assist us in our cause. Please seek their guidance, (comma) even if they do not represent your own profession - each of them may very well have an important task for you. If you looking to improve your weapons, talk to our Master Crafters outside. Runemaster Galia has specifically been assigned to assist with enchanting armor for our newcomers, make sure to talk to her right away.'
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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#38 » Wed Dec 09, 2009 10:26 pm

Starter items are "standart issue something-or-other" when they should be "standard issue something-or-other"
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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#39 » Wed Dec 09, 2009 10:39 pm

lots and lots of fresh examples of bad grammar await you ahead :mrgreen:
and welcome to the Warrens =)
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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#40 » Wed Dec 09, 2009 10:58 pm

Rungupp says, 'Hey meat is meat! I do what I can. And you! Stop asking these questions, and help me get some meat or I will smack you on the head, like I used to do back in forest, and cook you instead! The soldiers will never know the difference! If you help me ... I give you something big!.. Or something small, but shiny...'
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