The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#41 » Wed Dec 09, 2009 10:59 pm

Dorell Ironfist says, 'What do you know about The Warrens? About its inhabitants and their history?'

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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#42 » Wed Dec 09, 2009 11:59 pm

When you turn in the Anvil for 2.0 to... ummm... turn in guy (trying to keep it secret like you guys are haha but you know who i'm talking about ;P) He calls it an "Avil", you're missing the "n" ;)
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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#43 » Thu Dec 10, 2009 2:37 pm

Koeril wrote:Starter items are "standart issue something-or-other" when they should be "standard issue something-or-other"


thanks, all fixed but the above. Chaos plz do it if you understand what to fix :P

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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#44 » Thu Dec 10, 2009 2:44 pm

Standart vs Standard
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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#45 » Thu Dec 10, 2009 6:07 pm

lol got it =)
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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#46 » Mon Jan 04, 2010 10:15 pm

NPC: Murgot
Zone: THF

Murgot says, 'Our scouts report that our enemies are attempting to forge new powerful weapons of magical power. Their task is to gather some strange magical crystals in order to enchant those weapons. Find three of such crystals <comma deleted> and present it to me along with your class profession emblem that you have purchased from me and I will craft a powerful magical weapon for you.'

Murgot says, 'Have you heard of the famous ornate armor? This armor has lost its power since the first fall of the gods, but our enemies believe that it can be reforged. We believe so too, but our enemies also had more time to work on this problem<comma removed> and already gathering patterns and crafting materials to carry out this plan. We cannot allow them to outfit their troops before our allies are ready! If you are ready to to take on some Orcs in Crushbhone or Fiends in Paludal Caverns, I will tell you the secret of how to reforge the ornate armor.'

Murgot says, 'To reforge the ornate armor, you need three things: an emblem of your profession class, which you can purchase from me, an appropriate armor piece pattern, and the ornate crafting material appropriate to your armor class. If you wear cloth type armor then, you need to use Ornate Silk, if you wear leather, you need Ornate Leather, if you wear chain, you need Ornate Metal Rings, and finally, if you wear heavy plate, you need ornate metal Sheets. You need just one of the ornate materials per <word deleted> armor pattern, with exception of the legs and chest parts, which require two. Bring me all the required parts <comma deleted> and I will reforge the armor for you.'
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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#47 » Mon Jan 04, 2010 11:06 pm

thanks, fixed.

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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#48 » Tue Jan 05, 2010 12:00 am

NPC: Xikanir the Cursed Paladin
Zone: Kaesora

The book says that you must assemble all the ancient symbols in his presence ... The Symbol of Treachery from the ancient dragon, Vulak`Aerr. The Symbol of Greed from Kerafym the Sleeper. The Symbol of Chaos from Fennin Ro the Tyrant of Fire. The Symbol of Order from Xegony the Queen of Air.


Not really a grammar mistake, but the symbols of greed and treachery are reversed. Copy and paste this:

The book says that you must assemble all the ancient symbols in his presence ... The Symbol of Greed from the ancient dragon, Vulak`Aerr. The Symbol of Treachery from Kerafym the Sleeper. The Symbol of Chaos from Fennin Ro the Tyrant of Fire. The Symbol of Order from Xegony the Queen of Air.
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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#49 » Tue Jan 12, 2010 8:44 pm

NPC: Kallosia
Zone: PoAir

Original text: Kallosia abegins
Changed text: Kallosia begins

This error is found twice in her script so search for the string twice.
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Re: The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

Post#50 » Tue Jan 12, 2010 9:42 pm

Thanks, fixed.

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