The Grammar Police (Quest Dialogue Corrections)

[Arkadin]

Epic 1.5 (Kithicor)
"If you ever feel lost or unable to progress, don't be shy to ask for help, this is definitely not a journey to make on your own.."

Shouldn't this be "don't be too shy to ask for help"


NPC: Hogrid
Zone: Old Seblis

Quest text last part should be "I'm afraid you aren't ready for such (an) adventure"

[Jameus]

NPC: Aged Mushroom
Quest: VP key Quest

"Aged Mushroom says, The truth i tell you!... And thats all i will tell you!... All you must know is my path then the rest it up to you, find my research then return it to me and I will tell you more..."

Should read:

"Aged Mushroom says, The truth I tell you!... And that's all I will tell you!... All you must know is my path then the rest is up to you, find my research then return it to me and I will tell you more..."

Nothing major but noticed several instances of I's that needed to be in capitals and ' that should be added in many places

[Lillu]

All fixed. Thank you!

[Jameus]

NPC: Aged Mushroom
Quest: VP key Quest

"Aged Mushroom says, The truth i tell you!... And thats all i will tell you!... All you must know is my path then the rest it up to you, find my research then return it to me and I will tell you more..."

Should read:

"Aged Mushroom says, The truth I tell you!... And that's all I will tell you!... All you must know is my path then the rest is up to you, find my research then return it to me and I will tell you more..."

Nothing major but noticed several instances of I's that needed to be in capitals and ' that should be added in many places

When this was fixed the trigger was omitted from the word path to advance the quest dialogue and obtain the container. For now people will have to ask in say, what path? and then click "forgot" to get their container for combining the 5 pieces.

[Lillu]

Good catch, Thank you! Fixed.

[Bomb]

Text upon entering bird bath zone says "agumentation" instead of augmentation.

[Lillu]

thanks, good catch! fixed.

[Arkadin]

Hidden Forest
Teleporter Trix
1-30 zones

text is grammatically incorrect.

"Good day to you Takkun. Let me know when you are ready to start your journey in the dark [Unrest], the dangerous [Crushbone] or the deep [The Paludal Caverns]"


i would suggest rewriting the whole thing to something like

"Good day to you Takkun. Let me know when you are ready to start your journey. I can send (or teleport) you to the dark halls of [unrest], the dangers of [Crushbone] or deep into [The Paludal Caverns]"



npc: captain shollecs

zone: unrest

quest: who let the dogs out

he asks for 10 pelts/furs and quest only needs 5.




Also in unrest the word beetlings used in mobs name, beetling does not mean a young beetle.

Adj. 1.beetling - jutting or overhanging; "beetle brows"



zone: unrest

npc: groundkeeper billy

quest: who has the bug spray pt1

billy asks for a combination of beetles, beeltings, and spiderlings. quest journal lists spiders instead.

[Lillu]

Thank you Arkadin. All but the beetlings are edited. I love the "beetlings" thing

[Felibar]

Lilly for the improved charm quest.

After killing the 2 twins to get the 2.0, when you hail her:
"Thank you for saving my sisters, Felirek! You are The Saviour! Please give me your old Charm of Queen Adrianne and I will enchant it with ancien magic."

It should be "ancient"